Not one of my favorites, but we can't love them all. I do like the layered writing but the page doesn't "say" everything I want it to say. I feel like I'm mimicing the feelings of what's written on the page. I didn't feel like putting anymore energy or effort into it, so I turned the page and moved on. I may go back at some point and rework it. If I do, I'll post it.
I hope that your week is a creative one!